Today I looked at Carrie's blog "CARRIE" and my partner Ellie's blog. Although both were written in different styles, they were uniquely great.
Carrie's contained a few slightly incomplete posts, however, those that she had completed were fully to the point, and full of her comical voice. She presented a lot of information on her project and it was entertaining to read it because she presented it in a funny way. I think she could benefit from adding video clips to show her progress and to update the aesthetic of her blog as well.
Ellie's blog on the other hand had many posts, which touched on other aspects of her life such as being sick, Alex Turner, and her future years in Germany. I hadn't really considered doing this, however, it definitely made her blog fun to read. I also enjoyed reading Ellie's blog because she is my partner in this project and it was interesting to see her views.
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